Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

Seemed days had passed,

since I’d heard their steady cry,

my rooftop comes alive,

with the steady rains,

 

Oh we do need the tears,

especially in those quiet times,

when our heart has stopped.

 

The beat of our sympathy,

some time lost in the scathing heat,

of a hot sunlight,

meant to persecute our peaceful

sanctuary.

 

I heard the rains begin,

the drops of cleansing cry,

she told me they would arrive.

 

And so I listened,

and could cry for hours afterward.

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  1. michnavs Avatar

    Ahhhhh rain….brings out a lot of emotions

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      It does indeed, thanks 🙂 I have a smile now.

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