What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem #904 Kazahana (snowflakes)

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snow
outside my window

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soft snow sweet

gentle reminder

real lovely flakes

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outside the glass

feathers drift moonlit

snowflake Heavens

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somber mind frames

a doorway to the cool breeze

so sweet snowflakes

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peace

forget humanity’s torment

visualize flakes

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my gasps are

audible to tonight’s world

painted dream

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Carpe Diem #904 Kazahana

 

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  1. From my Forest (@hamish_gunn) Avatar
    From my Forest (@hamish_gunn)

    Peaceful and heartfelt about the fragile snowflakes…

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you Forest – I am delighted.

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  2. lynn__ Avatar
    lynn__

    The last two haiku are my favorites!

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      thom amundsen

      thank you – I’m glad you like it … 🙂

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  3. rheumatologe Avatar
    rheumatologe

    Nice set of haiku.

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      thom amundsen

      Thank you very much 🙂

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