Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

We would choose ice

floes slap seal where currents

run strong summer

~

a ski swift we

fall forever snow icy depths

then Joan Baez sings

~

cabin warmth snow cling

melts in shadowed wintertime view

beautiful

~

fresh air freeze

sillhouettes in our travel

on nature’s ice

~

we would warm

sweet breeze of arctic air

our lives alive again

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  1. writersdream9 Avatar

    Love the whole thing. My favorite line is “our lives alive again”!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you, so kind 🙂

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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