I Was A Child

photo the Berlin Wall
            photo the Berlin Wall

Carpe Diem Time Glass #33 The Wall Berlin

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small child hands

chalk scrapes mortar cracks

school building walls

when I think of the Berlin wall, I only imagine the walls of my school

people with lives

contained by fear’s talon

both similar sides

I remember wondering if there were crossing points in the wall itself

fortress keep secrets

we live the same on either side

yet together lost

when the wall came down a celebration occurred across the world

she stood nearby alone

structure in powdered remains

yet human still

when she walked away that day, her tears remained

yet no one could see

beyond the wrinkled hands she held

hope, selfless … souls

9 responses to “I Was A Child”

  1. Wow. Just wow. This is amazing.

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    1. Thanks CE, this wall took me through my childhood, but always from afar … 🙂

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    doveinthedungeon

    Very nicely done!
    Adding the prose to the haiku ties it together very well.

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    1. thanks it was a fun write 🙂

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  3. Very well done .. an interesting way to write the post … not a haibun but more than just haiku … 🙂

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    1. thank you, I am experimenting with Haiku style finally after much feedback from certainly wonderful writers here – I will pay more attention to the haibun in the future as well 🙂 peace!

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      1. Ah … there’s always room for the individual style in the world of modern English haiku … unless you encounter the straight-laced classical haiku group of course 😉

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      2. I have recognized a very flexible and open environment here that fascinates me with everyone’s love of words and playing with such travels … thank you 🙂

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      3. Very welcome Thom and happy writing! 🙂

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