Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

snow covered trees

I remember that day,

it was 7th grade civics class

We had to draw the landscape

the colors turning. We could see.

When then we each with a notepad

began to venture into a faraway

retreat away, the sky brilliance

our guide toward a fantasy.

~

I was unable to recall later

that cold December morning

just how beautiful the leaves

were just weeks earlier, radiant

in the autumn sunlight.

Life was an easy walk

along pathways that

breathed the lovely

vestige of Nature’s remedy.

~

Winter skies are meant to

chill our heart and soul.

The trees hadn’t any designs

to seek desire’s passion.

Today the branches remained

stark and sleek, now barren,

holding only a key toward

sudden loss, the fallen summer.

~

A week earlier the branches held a fresh snow

At least he felt shelter in his new travel home.

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  1. Catnip Avatar

    I love traveling….so beautifully written

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you very much … there is a real story here 🙂

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      1. Catnip Avatar

        Oh, did he find home and shelter and someone to love?

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      2. thom amundsen Avatar

        In a manner of speaking, yes. He would know he is loved.

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