What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem Special #196 Hamish Gunn’s 2nd “on the street corner”

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solitude

unwelcome advance ironic

still alone

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a child sings

notes of melancholy

will the door open

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I watched life

acting out, shedding values

damn it was fun

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too late frantic

realizations of passion

kids will still cry

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lamppost chatter

a warm summer evening

cold hearts

~

I wish to breathe

if might love be found

I wish to breathe

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Carpe Diem Special #196 Hamish Gunn’s 2nd “on the street corner”

5 responses

  1. kaykuala (@hankkaykuala) Avatar
    kaykuala (@hankkaykuala)

    The last one is the best. One will always like to give love a chance, lots of chances in fact! Great lines Thom!

    Hank

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thank you very much 🙂

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    I read a quiet desperation in this!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      oh, well thank you, the speaker is unknown 🙂

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar
        writersdream9

        You’re welcome. Fiction, huh? 🙂

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