Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

fond in memory

she wore her fragrance of love

her sweets spoke real

~

would I when alone

imagine, taste, delicious, her

eyes would speak surreal

~

a smile, a glance, peace

when longing is a world dream

solace, sweet, serene

~

I am standing near

a universal speak sincere

sweet remedy is near

~

Carpe Diem #909 Sweetness

5 responses

  1. glacial caramel(s) Avatar

    I love this. Fantastic.

    My favorite section is derived from combining these three lines:

    “her sweets spoke real
    ~
    would I when alone
    imagine, taste, delicious, her”

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      Your comments delight me, I’m glad you enjoyed this piece. 🙂 Thank you! 🙂

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar
    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you … a pleasant write

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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