Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

a time before mine

silent in passionate night

train sounds whine

~

in present mind

our lives listen to the sky

a distant remind

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the echo of nature

lost in Her brilliant forest

she speaks mature

~

if now in my own

pleasant reality of time

listen to be known

~

Carpe Diem #908 Hearing

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  1. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

    Very nice series Thom. All beauties, but your first is my favorite … sounds awesome.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you always Chevrefeuille 🙂

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