What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Walks – Carpe Diem Special #194 A Trip Along Memory Lane

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would we walk

in open fields in May

while wondering

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love a mystery

sweet underbrush of thyme

always asking

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sudden were your moves

me, naive in love, yet

able to forget

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sunlight surreal

the fields, the open breeze

you, miles away, gone

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Carpe Diem special #194

11 responses

  1. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    Very nice response Thom. Your muse was active. A beautiful series of haiku in which love and romance is really present. Love-haiku … awesome.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you Chevrefeuille – the music is fabulous

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    The whole series is an endearment!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thank you 😀

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar
        writersdream9

        My pleasure.

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  3. rudraprayaga Avatar
    rudraprayaga

    I liked the lines.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thank you 🙂

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  4. jazzytower Avatar
    jazzytower

    So beautifully done, a lovely read:)

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you so much 🙂

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  5. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    These are all beautiful!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Well, thank you I’m pleased, very kind 🙂

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