Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

life breathe free

I stand inside a melody

sweet steamy me

~

where is energy

from the ground in symphony

water bathes harmony

~

she said hold rocks

feel nature is an energy

will hold peace

~

inside our Earth

we recognize a new delight

bathe alone in fog

~

a human being

a gift of the land I may feel

delight in hot waters

~

Carpe Diem #903 ‘Hot Springs’

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  1. writersdream9 Avatar

    Great depth in this!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you 🙂 Very kind

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      1. writersdream9 Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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