Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

Will I be relieved

having made it again,

walking home with you

only the memory,

we didn’t know then

years later

I’d stil be wondering when

we did first have that moment

if and when you might return.

I know that God suggests a lot

of our own desires become the reality

of our dreams,

yet when it happens,

sometimes, I feel like it could be so sweet

to try it again,

to have just that one last chance,

to remember how we

you and me,

how the day went on forever,

and now today we simply

remember.

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  1. Pratyusha Avatar

    Amazing 🙂

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      you are very kind indeed 🙂

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