Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

I will always be a reminder

if you glance

my eyes can speak of truth,

that memory,

the time,

an hour of my life,

became your world,

though I couldn’t finish the thought.

~

I was distracted then,

as I try tonight, today,

yesterday, hours ago,

in a month when a certain

sight, song, stance

a posture will bring you

square standing

solid with eyes I cry.

~

It is just that,

we both could realize,

how only a surreal visual

could offer a tear,

not simple to suggest,

we are not crying,

we will always cherish

a splendid time in life.

~

I know I will, only when …

5 responses

  1. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
    thefeatheredsleep

    I’ve been trying to work out who your work reminds me of. I remembered. As a kid in France I read Paul Celan’s work. You write with his attention and passion my friend

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      Wow, I don’t know what to say. Thank you so much πŸ™‚

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      1. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
        thefeatheredsleep

        De nada my friend. Truth is freeβ™‘

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  2. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
    thefeatheredsleep

    This is lovely Thom

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you πŸ™‚

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