What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem #831 Ohmato Taikai (Festival of the Great Target)

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perhaps just knives

such painful skewered purpose

targets; our lives

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  1. Paloma Avatar
    Paloma

    Very nicely done —-

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you, such kind words 🙂

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      1. Paloma Avatar
        Paloma

        Very welcome 🙂

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  2. Forest Tinker Avatar
    Forest Tinker

    Superb.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Wow, thanks Forest! means the world to me.

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  3. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    Powerful and profound.

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      thom amundsen

      thank you so much!

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