Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

That space we seldom see,

unless already known,

the mask regrets nothing

while internal turmoil creeps

about waiting,

about wanting,

about hoping to lash out,

when the time is right.

When our mecca,

single-most desire,

passion

steps toward a ledge,

we cower again,

we scramble to grasp

a mask,

a shelter to protect

our, his, my, your, we’re all

yearning.

Seems readily available,

a facade I mean,

that piece of fabric

transparent when we will it to be.

Yet, in the midst of turbulence,

a cacophony of havoc,

when then we realize

efforts in vanity

far outweigh a

genuine disorder,

well then

might we all smile,

to know just once,

that certain need to survive,

universal.

Sleep well with your mask,

gently placed on the end table.

You’ll find it again,

the moment hope is needed,

in the chaotic nature,

defines,

the human condition.

10 responses

  1. melxdyy Avatar
    melxdyy

    This is extremely beautiful! I hope it lives for decades to come:)

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      Wow, this certainly makes my night – thank you so much! 🙂

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      1. melxdyy Avatar
        melxdyy

        Oh I’m glad tht I’ve made your night:) you’re welcome!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you DE 🙂 sort of a free-write

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  2. petraperkov Avatar
    petraperkov

    How very insightful! Beautiful post, honestly.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      Thank you so much 🙂

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  3. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
    thefeatheredsleep

    Really love this one Thom.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you 🙂

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      1. thefeatheredsleep Avatar
        thefeatheredsleep

        Beautiful work my friend

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