What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem #772 Taki (Waterfall)

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waterfall

By my life you fall

when ever I venture near by

with simple task

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  1. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    That’s a powerful life!

    Waterfall

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thanks so much, felt good 🙂

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  2. readinpleasure Avatar
    readinpleasure

    What a great take!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thanks just felt like I was sitting on a river 😉

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  3. moondustwriter Avatar
    moondustwriter

    it is hard to leave the river behind
    Lovely Thom

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      why thanks, very kind, and definitely true … 🙂

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