What Crosses My Mind

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At The Seashore

romance in nature’s grasp … pretty

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With sundown eyes closed
Listening to waves and seagulls
I reach for your hand

In response to CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI: Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #49 at the seashore

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  1. Dancing Echoes Avatar
    Dancing Echoes

    Wow, what an honor. Sometimes I feel I don’t know what I am doing. Other times I feel things just come through me as if I am the wire, not the electricity.

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      thom amundsen

      I just really enjoy the simplicity I think everyone has experienced – ‘the reach – 🙂

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  2. Dancing Echoes Avatar
    Dancing Echoes

    Are they watching a literal sunset or the sunset of their lives?

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      thom amundsen

      Oh I think the latter could be comforting, didn’t think of that 🙂

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      1. Dancing Echoes Avatar
        Dancing Echoes

        FYI, I just updated this piece.

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      2. thom amundsen Avatar
        thom amundsen

        lovely

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