What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Walk With Me – Ligo_Haibun

Sunlight crisp in autumn winds, our walk brief,

familiar yet deluded, sad, glance ahead …

sad

sweet memory lost

my own heart truly tested

quiet, walks away

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  1. Hamish 'Managua' Gunn Avatar
    Hamish ‘Managua’ Gunn

    Both powerful emotionally and a vivid image. You put the setting so well, then that very evocative haiku – can be felt. Well done.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Wow, I really appreciate your commentary. Thanks!

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