Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.
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Even a patch of moss will continue, tracks of departure might go on forever, representing time, indicating a place, perhaps a change, certainly challenges a person can decide upon with the next arrival …
prepared, packed, purpose
aware of time we decline
moss softens the rail
Beautiful, and timeless thoughts that give real pause for contemplation. Welcome to Ligo Haibun – wonderful start!
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thanks so much – poetry form offers so many opportunities. I feel like a kid in a candy store sometimes. 🙂
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Such a beautiful piece. I like the circularity of it and how you made use of the prompt.
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What a delightful complement – thanks so much for taking the time. 🙂
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Very thought provoking. I like the idea of moss softening the journey.
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Thanks so much, I really appreciate your taking the time … 🙂
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