Train Travel – Haibun Poem

Even a patch of moss will continue, tracks of departure might go on forever, representing time, indicating a place, perhaps a change, certainly challenges a person can decide upon with the next arrival …

prepared, packed, purpose

aware of time we decline

moss softens the rail

 

 

6 responses to “Train Travel – Haibun Poem”

  1. Beautiful, and timeless thoughts that give real pause for contemplation. Welcome to Ligo Haibun – wonderful start!

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    1. thanks so much – poetry form offers so many opportunities. I feel like a kid in a candy store sometimes. 🙂

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  2. Such a beautiful piece. I like the circularity of it and how you made use of the prompt.

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    1. What a delightful complement – thanks so much for taking the time. 🙂

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  3. Very thought provoking. I like the idea of moss softening the journey.

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    1. Thanks so much, I really appreciate your taking the time … 🙂

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