Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

It is that notion of connection

That interaction

Our possibilities; a sultry, smooth, seduction

Any random afternoon

When your tone, a sort of moon

Lit serenade

I look at you

You look at me

I see a smirk and we are sliding toward

Sea level

That is where I want to be with you

below the horizon

just off the grid

Where I may glance upon your lovely skin

While others go about their lives

Unraveled and distracted just beyond the edge

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  1. Lady Pinkrose Avatar

    Really beautiful. Thank you for starting my day with this poem. Ahhh…….

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    1. Thom Amundsen Avatar

      thank you 🙂

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  2. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister Avatar

    Well done, Thom. I can relate to the emotion.

    ~Audrey

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    1. Thom Amundsen Avatar

      thank you so much 🙂 I appreciate you taking the time.

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  3. Desiree G Avatar
    Desiree G

    Below the horizon sounds like home to me. 😉

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