What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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My Life Is Good

Put aside the frail commentary,

The lock and key criticism.

Think for the moment all is good,

Our lives but a brief memory.

What is it we wish to remain,

Principles of how we live life.

For only a silence listen to an

Occasional pause, and breathe.

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    sharingknowledge

    aquietwalk,

    I like your last line, though my thought process adds a few words.

    Occasionally pause, and breathe…., and then move on.

    Sorry about that, but I think the positive sentiment is vital in life.

    Regards, Phil ________________________________

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      aquietwalk

      Thanks, Phil

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