Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

It seems an endless float, 

everything around me, 

gently sweeping by. 

All my thoughts come surging, 

sending me in motion, 

without anywhere to land. 

I can still breathe here, 

and my eyes are deceived. 

Seems the dive will last 

until I lose consciousness, 

but I can never know when that will be. 

I’ll be in a constant appeal, 

trying to find my way back. 

When I dive deep, 

it’s no longer my personal tour.

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