What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Carpe Diem #913 spirituality

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I used to pray

give me a sign, give me hope

I found another

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pray for my soul

ask forgiveness, pity me

perhaps I’m ready

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I used to pray

wish upon change, ask for more

then I found …

love

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  1. Candy Avatar
    Candy

    how tender this is

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you 🙂

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  2. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    A precious haiku!

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  3. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    And Love is the only energy we need … nice series Thom

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      thom amundsen

      Thank you very much 🙂

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