What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Favor Today – Carpe Diem #910 Bitterness/Sour

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favor love today

spiritual reckoning

soft heart Grace seek

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we are a prison

locked inside our fantasy

bitter reminder

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like a winter peace

we do when love does cry

know no sour taste

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examine labors

delicious wise fruition

express love alive

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Carpe Diem #910 Bitterness/Sour

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  1. amoafowaa Avatar
    amoafowaa

    Cool. Love the last stanza.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      very cool back to you. thanks! 🙂

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  2. B i r g i t t a Avatar
    B i r g i t t a

    I like the 2-nd best – although I don’t feel like living in a prison 😉

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      oh indeed, I agree 🙂 thanks

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