What Crosses My Mind

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Carpe Diem #898 Yukibare (clear sky between (after) snowfall)

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clear pane deception

looking glass cool naked eye

crystal clear

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an internal fire

contrasts blue shimmer sky

window crystalize

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would we walk

together in morning ice

crystal eyes

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Carpe Diem #898

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  1. moondustwriter Avatar
    moondustwriter

    The ice drips and crystalizes on the next haiku – stuning

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      well thanks, I’m glad you enjoyed 🙂

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  2. janicead Avatar
    janicead

    Oh, those crystal eyes!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      haha, thanks so much!

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  3. writersdream9 Avatar
    writersdream9

    These are contemplative!

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you very much for reading 🙂

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        writersdream9

        My pleasure.

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