Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

© Donna J Thomas
© Donna J Thomas

In here I am speaking of a world I do not personally know, yet only can imagine. In time, though we, with knowledge of what is real may slowly strive to then appreciate change, and center our world with ‘love’

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We did know her pain

witnesses of vacancy

in the Man that spoke

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watch and learn and cry

for no other reason why

except to accept

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time is a rule now

learned with years of sacrifice

these blues so sweet sing

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when last we spoke you

suggested lies forgiven

yet still your eyes play

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Society breathe

spark imagination wake

our proclivity

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listen to passions

jazzy instrumental speak

loud cry on this love!

carpe diem

11 responses

  1. Forest Man Avatar

    Nice introduction, and some very nice haiku there. Good theme

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you 🙂

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      Thank you Benji, I appreciate your reading and comments …

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  2. Bastet Avatar

    Loved your set of haiku … they flow well together creating a story.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you so much 🙂

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  3. Gemma Wiseman Avatar

    This love has a few weatherings and textures. An interesting set of haiku.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      thank you for your thoughts … 🙂

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar

      sweet complement, thank you!

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