What Crosses My Mind

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Seeking New Solace – Carpe Diem #61, first light

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waking while mourning

a spiritual cadence

sweep brief emotion

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light emanate soft

a new day, quick reckoning

touch opportunity

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when time can renew

sweet lift full heart to review

seeking new solace.

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  1. moondustwriter Avatar
    moondustwriter

    There is solace in that first light. Beautiful set of haiku.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Thank you so much for feedback. 🙂

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  2. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    I suspect there are a lot of mourners who walk their grief away…

    Even in Half-Light

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      Perhaps you are right 🙂 thank you.

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  3. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    In that first light there lays the solace … what a great haiku triplet you have shared here Thom.

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    1. thom amundsen Avatar
      thom amundsen

      thank you 🙂

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