Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

rain

Soft, sweet rains

kind, glancing off my arms

and naked knees

skipping in the rain

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You used to laugh

and twirl in circles

thinking only happy things

when the rains came

~

If I was in your eyes

I mean really there

reflecting off of you

I could walk in any rain

~

Seems we often

fail to realize

the champion of our fears

can be a quiet rain

~

Where else do we find

a certain solace, a cleansing

love, mist that sweeps

then in a spring rain

~

I once knew a certain peace

I could always be with you

I would surely be content

with only you in the rain.

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  1. busymindthinking Avatar

    My love of rain…needless to say I love this piece.

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    1. thom Avatar

      you’re very kind Belinda 🙂

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      1. busymindthinking Avatar

        As are you. Smiles

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  2. Reenie Denver Avatar

    Simply beautiful.

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    1. thom Avatar

      thank you very much 🙂

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