Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

sunlight surreal

eyes fade shadowed waves do smile

one drop, soul remain

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  1. Ese' s Voice Avatar
    1. thom Avatar

      thanks so much, Ese 🙂

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    That instant of glittering waves.. has to be the one we all live for.

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    1. thom Avatar

      indeed, thanks 🙂

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  3. Fly Indie Avatar

    Very nice – I’d break from the 575 though

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    1. thom Avatar

      thanks … though not sure what you intend with a haiku format …

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      1. Fly Indie Avatar

        I think that by sticking to 575 you are bound by form at the expense of meaning. Anyway, very nice haiku.

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      2. thom Avatar

        I see, well yes that certainly makes sense – a story lies in there I suppose 🙂 thanks!

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  4. milan rajkumar Avatar

    your take totally take my breath away !

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    1. thom Avatar

      lol, thank you so much 🙂

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      1. milan rajkumar Avatar

        welcome ! 🙂

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  5. moondustwriter Avatar

    The pebble has to begin or end at the ocean. Lovely Thom

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    1. thom Avatar

      thank you 🙂

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  6. Bastet Avatar

    Beautifully meditation …

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    1. thom Avatar

      Thank you 🙂

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      1. Bastet Avatar

        Welcome .. 🙂

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  7. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    When the sunlight is surreal, maybe it’s time to seek the “merely” real!

    Pebble Shadows

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    1. thom Avatar

      Ah, where was that word earlier 🙂

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  8. Chèvrefeuille Avatar

    What a nice response on ‘pebble’ Thom …

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