What Crosses My Mind

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Carpe Diem Haiku – Footprints

step slow heel sweet slide

skin taste soil now soft tease sole

sounds signatures souls

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  1. moondustwriter Avatar
    moondustwriter

    almost silent but not quite…
    Delightful haiku

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    1. thom Avatar
      thom

      yes, thanks so much 🙂

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  2. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
    Chèvrefeuille

    Silence caught in three lines … I like your style of composing.

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    1. thom Avatar
      thom

      thank you 🙂 every haiku is an experiment for me, but what a great site to practice on.

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      1. Chèvrefeuille Avatar
        Chèvrefeuille

        I am glad that you like our cdhk weblog Thom … and it’s great to meet new poets … so feel free to visit again … welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

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        thom

        I look forward to it, thanks so much Chevrefeuille.

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        Chèvrefeuille

        Spread the word 🙂 I am glad that you are part of our Carpe Diem haiku-family …

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      4. thom Avatar
        thom

        thank you so much – pleasure to be here 🙂

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