Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

countryroad

We wind ourselves along a country road

embrace the fields and stone, love is an ode

our vehicle moves along sharply, swift

beyond us left behind, a sort of gift

in retrospect, we are moving forward

hope to satisfy having the last word.

I walked outside and glanced upon the moon,

breathe in your tease; a certain need to swoon

when in nature’s path I believe, caress

beauty’s own elegance in our duress.

We will remember the breeze, we flew by

such private lives that were just asking why.

A brief glimpse of a melancholy tear

Shines lights upon the open road we fear.

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  1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

    Reblogged this on By the Mighty Mumford and commented:
    A VERY SCENIC SONNET!!!!

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    1. thom Avatar

      Awesome! Thanks so much Jonathan, I’m so glad you liked it! 🙂

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      1. Jonathan Caswell Avatar

        REALLY!!!! 🙂

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      2. thom Avatar

        🙂

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