Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

Yes, I remember well

Walking together in the autumn rain

Soft and warm, a swell

of passion of delight of little restrain

Sneak upon alley way

Our hearts beating as we found a wall

Here we may quiet stay

Sheltered from the rain out of all call

Eyes meet with smiles

Clothes already damp with abandon

We will travel new miles

As our bodies intertwine; we hold on

Naked shoulders gasps

Wanton search of planned fingertips

Neck bites as hands clasp

Legs stretch wet jeans in body’s grip

The rains sweet soothing

While our passions erupt driving sounds

Real desire emanating

My hands finding heat and new abounds

Nearby a gate creaks sound

We part with arms entwined and notice

Movement to suggest end

Our passions abated hands now entice

Lovely eyes that glance

Inside one another’s soul as we stroll

Further in the rain with chance

Return our passions while we play this role

We do discover today is love

Life begins surreal in sounds like doves

5 responses

  1. erikafuego Avatar

    this is so beautiful. I loved it!

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    1. Thom Amundsen Avatar

      thanks so much, I am delighted you are following and enjoyed this piece. 🙂

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  2. j9epoetry Avatar

    This is my third time reading today. Really love this poem

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    1. Thom Amundsen Avatar

      Glad to have your interest in such a fun piece … memory is an awesome tool. Thanks.

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