Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

Look outside

See the cosmetic beauty

Of a well planned excursion

Attention to detail

Every curve, all lines drawn

A mesh of coiffed beauty

Eyes created in sparkle

~

Glance inside

To know the storms

Drawing waves that slap

With agony the seas

Of internal torment

~

Look outside

See the dialogue

Connects two driven vessels

Of interaction

All hoping to ride

The crest of the next surge

~

Glance inside

To know the storms

Drawing waves that slap

With agony the seas

Of internal torment

~

Look outside

While walking away

We all might have the same stance

Our actions emulate

One another’s desire

To maintain a steady course

~

Glance inside …

Look outside …

~

Tonight the stars in full arena steady our soul

2 responses

  1. SHIRLEY MAYA TAN Avatar
    1. Thom Amundsen Avatar

      thank you! πŸ™‚

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