What Crosses My Mind

Here I will focus the writing on poetry and commentary.

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Only a Fleeting Moment

So close

I could feel the moment

Just reach and respond

And in fell swoop

Our lives are forever changed

No possibility to return

Because absolute is defined

The reality of this moment

Sends shivers

Through my mind

We can justify

Human nature

Only when reality

Allows a return

To normalcy

But tonight that logic

Took a back seat

To impulse

And there it remained

Simply a notion

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Only a fleeting moment

9 responses

  1. Talicha J. Avatar
    Talicha J.

    ah, one moment is all it takes for a lot of things. thanks so much for sharing!

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    1. thommya Avatar
      thommya

      thanks for taking a glance … 🙂

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      1. Talicha J. Avatar
        Talicha J.

        No problem, it was my pleasure. I look forward to more of your work! are you on twitter?

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      2. thommya Avatar
        thommya

        yes, thommy_a

        thanks!

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      3. Talicha J. Avatar
        Talicha J.

        awesome, I just followed you!

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      4. thommya Avatar
        thommya

        Thanks Talicha 🙂

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      5. Talicha J. Avatar
        Talicha J.

        no problem, I look forward to keep up with your writing!

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      6. thommya Avatar
        thommya

        Awesome, and I will do the same with yours … take care

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      7. Talicha J. Avatar
        Talicha J.

        Ah thanks!

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